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An island

Posted by magnesium on 12 April 2018 in English (English)

So this is my 10th diary entry, and I'd like to show you this. Jackson Island is in Charlington and has Wakeham next to it. It has its own railway. So, anyway that's my island! Constructive criticism is appreciated. (Sorry about the flood)

Location: Hammersmith, Charlington, Commonia

Comment from eklas on 12 April 2018 at 20:04

...your 10th diary entry.

I'm sorry my dear but the things you draw are just... off. Why is literally nothing orthogonal? Why are the buildings so large?

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Comment from The_Cute_Chick on 12 April 2018 at 20:32

@magnesium,

Firstly, you may want to map out the actual island for those buildings to be built on because currently those buildings are built on the seabed partially or completely submerged in the Charlington Sea.

Secondly, the buildings are oversized. They need to be downsized and squared to be more realistic.

Thirdly, the train platforms are too far away from the tracks, creating an approximately 10 metre gap.

Fourthly, The road network can be straightened out because the whole network is unnecessarily crooked.

Lastly, the railway could be straightened because trains (if any) are not going to be able to travel at the expected speed going through those curves.

You should look at the neighbouring town Wakeham to see what you can improve Jackson on.

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Comment from Jesus Antonio on 12 April 2018 at 20:39

Really?, A floating city?, wow, so realistic.

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Comment from ADB52 on 12 April 2018 at 22:02

Suggest to deal with the coastline issues which are causing the flooding

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Comment from zhenkang on 12 April 2018 at 23:11

Just to ask, why is there a railway on a small island? Is it neccessary to have one?

The new Venice of Commonia....

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Comment from magnesium on 13 April 2018 at 09:37

@zhenkang, I don't think that Venice is an island.

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Comment from zhenkang on 13 April 2018 at 09:41

@Mg Becaue the city is flooded, remains me of Venice...

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Comment from magnesium on 13 April 2018 at 09:52

Why'd you post that three times?

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Comment from The_Cute_Chick on 13 April 2018 at 10:27

@magnesium,

It was probably unintentional. You should have realised.

XP

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Comment from magnesium on 13 April 2018 at 10:36

I know. LOL

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Comment from zhenkang on 13 April 2018 at 11:37

Oh it is by accident. I pressed save more than once. So....

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Comment from The_Cute_Chick on 13 April 2018 at 21:45

@magnesium,

If you knew why @zhenkang posted 3 times, why did you ask?

"LOL".

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Comment from magnesium on 13 April 2018 at 23:37

because i thought his internet was laggy

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