River Detailing Attempt Feedback

Posted by MOI N on 13 April 2020 in English.

I haven’t done a diary entry in ages, mainly cause i took a 2 month break from OGF Jan-March , and the fact that whenever i try ask for feedback , i basically get spam.

The Khatstow River sounds like it has a unusual name for a mostly-ingerish city. It’s named after Ambrozy Khatstow , the first person to attempt to settle land disputes around Cygagon in the 1840s , who lived just outside Point Fern in the village of Konwicz (Now Known as Andrewden).

I have tried my best to create a realistic large river , with several small shoulders ( and the Large Lake Hozanna by the coast ). I just want to know how i’ve done.

Khatstow River: here

Discussion

Comment from MOI N on 14 April 2020 at 20:03

I Apologise and will change it from a lake to a marsh (that’s what i meant to do , but forgot!) , give it a larger opening , and give it more nodes.

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