GregoryLoss's Diary

RE: Berwick

Posted by GregoryLoss on 15 March 2018 in English.

I have revoked on working on Berwick and have decided to continue on my past project on New Atlantia in the location below I have a solid idea of how i’ll do it, and it’ll be more successful than Berwick I think.

The Location is here because the map thing wouldn’t work

Discussion

Comment from austinhuang on 16 March 2018 at 03:59

Please ask an admin to delete your previous entry if it is rendered useless. Some suggestions:

Airport

The airport runways and taxiways are messy. Reference real-world ones.
What’s the tunnel road doing there???
The LeitzAirlines building is actually facing an end of a runway. Do planes crash into that building?
What’s the art museum doing there?

Roads

Downgrade the motorway to a normal boulevard, maybe with fewer intersections. A motorway is totally unnecessary for a city of that size. It also ruins the view.
Central Pkwy and Gladstone Ave should just be normal traffic, not with unnecessary service roads and stack intersections.

Buildings

The university sports pitch should be given more land. Better if you build a university stadium and a better pitch in the suburbs. (Concordia Univ. in Montreal, Canada has two campuses: One in downtown with high-rises and one in the suburbs with a large football ground and some old American-college-like buildings.)
Everything in the theme park is too small. And what’s the veteran memorial doing there?
Two Central Parks…Remove the small one. Remove the roads crossing it: They’re completely unnecessary and also spoil the view.
Parking don’t take up a whole building. So put underground garages as nodes and put them inside office buildings.
On the east side, the parking on Main Street is way too oversized.
Some buildings are improperly sized.

Future

Make residential areas.
The downtown CBD is quite saturated right now. Maybe spread it out and insert more green spaces. Also, try moving the airport away: You don’t have an airport so close to your CBD. (Toronto counts as an exception but in that case, there’s water as a barrier)

Apparently, you’re not new and you already have a territory. After all, your CBD is quite detailed. So come on! You can do better.

Comment from GregoryLoss on 16 March 2018 at 15:12

Thanks man, but this was a project in the previous time when I started, I’ll start working on it

Comment from austinhuang on 16 March 2018 at 16:20

Not necessary continuing to work on it…Maybe take these suggestions into developing your own territory and leave this blue-territory city to someone else, I’d say.

Comment from GregoryLoss on 17 March 2018 at 04:34

Oh thanks

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